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It was Christmas night and when North gets done bringing presents to everyone he throws a party. Every guardian is there including Jack. It’s all fun for them. The have a dinner, play games that Jack suggested, exchange gifts from each other, and now they were about to have dessert.

North was cutting the cake and giving everyone a slice. Once the have they sat down and took their cups and cheer “Merry Christmas!!”

Once everyone took a bite Tooth said, “Wow, North, this is amazing.”

“I’ll say.” Jack said in agreement while everyone else nodded, “You make a really good cake.”

“Oh I didn’t make it, but I’ll get who did.” He asked a yeti to bring the chef in here. A couple minutes later, five elves showed up with the yeti.

“Well who made it?” North asked.

The yeti pointed at the elves before they left the room.

Everyone was shocked before everyone immediately tried to get every last bit of cake out of their mouth cause they knew about the elves of how they lick stuff and are kind of dumb.

Jack rubbed his tongue to get his cake out, Bunny and Sandy threw up, Tooth used some water to rinsed his mouth, North was doing the same.

No one felt good after all that and went back to there place.

 

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4 months later

 

“…And that’s why I didn’t eat cake for a while.” Jack finished his story about that Christmas party to Jamie.

“Wow. I thought the elves made the toys.” Jamie stated.

“No. They don’t but we let them believe they do.”

Well there a one-shot about that horrible night. Was it good? Horrible? Great? Awesome? Give me a 1-10. 1 horrible. 10 great. 5 good and bad. Tell me! please *puppy face*
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SakuraSnowBlizzard Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This story was pretty good, though I think you could have gone a little farther with the idea to make it funnier. Added more details to help the story. So, I'll give it a 7. Hope this helped.
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IceColdGirl123 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013   Traditional Artist
Thanks. This one shot just all of the sudden came from the back of my head. I'm glad you like it.
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JayaLaw Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:giggle: Those elves are so cute but need to be careful with what they put in their mouths.
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IceColdGirl123 Featured By Owner May 12, 2013   Traditional Artist
I know right :D
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JayaLaw Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
They should stick to trumpets and fanfares.
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IceColdGirl123 Featured By Owner May 12, 2013   Traditional Artist
That they should. :D
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JayaLaw Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I kinda hope that they're downplayed in the sequel, funny as they were, because they remind me too much of the Despicable Me minions.
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IceColdGirl123 Featured By Owner May 12, 2013   Traditional Artist
They do, now that I think of it.
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